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Re: Short Story: Towns - the Goblin War

Postby YetiChow » Tue Jul 03, 2012 5:01 am

ooh, this is getting good :D I love the backstory starting to be unveiled, and there is so much action and suspense obviously just around the corner...

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Re: Short Story: Towns - the Goblin War

Postby evaldazz » Tue Jul 03, 2012 5:52 am

Yeah 'The Goblin War' is certainly getting more attention. At the mo,i'm shifting stuff between houses and i'm trying to punch a novel out (not towns), so I write 'The Goblin War' as a break from the usual. So I'm quite busy right now, but I'd b honoured to join ure forum game. Perhaps in a minor capacity at first? :D
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Re: Short Story: Towns - the Goblin War

Postby evaldazz » Sat Jul 07, 2012 12:15 pm

Last one was late, so I figured i'd post this one up early for you guys... enjoy :D

Towns – The Goblin War
Guy Severn

Part three – Brom's secret


Gosbeck swung his hammer to the side smashing a rearing giant spider into the wall of the cave. Another was intercepted by Terryn as he slid into the room and cleaved it in half with his iconic curved Khopesh blade. This drew the attention of two slimes and another three arachnids. Then at that moment five guards of Aranaea came storming around the corner and laid the creatures to waste with Spiderite sword.

They saw the next group of spiders gathering at the end of the tunnel. They converged on a group of slimes and the wave of horrors blocked the way forward.
“Show them no mercy!” Terryn cried as he charged. “Let them feel Brom’s wrath!”

The heroes and guards of Aranaea crashed into the group of monsters and hacked a bloody corridor through them. The fight was short and brutal, bodies of spiders and green slime lay everywhere. After the clash, they took a moment to check their condition. One of the guards was wounded and a barbarian had taken a severe bite to his arm.

“You two go back to town,” Terryn ordered. “I think we’ve got enough to finish the job.”

It was then Terryn noticed Gosbeck had spotted something odd about the end of the tunnel. A slight glow was coming from around the corner. But what was stranger was the walls ahead were straight and made from large red building stones they’d never encountered before.

“This mortar is fresh,” the town supervisor said in astonishment overlooking the stones, “less than a decade old…”
“Impossible,” Terryn scoffed.
They entered a large room made from the same red stone. Terryn suddenly heard the familiar hissing from a giant spider somewhere behind him. Gosbeck readied his hammer, but Terryn raised his hand.

“I have this one, my northern friend…” he instructed, drawing his champagne coloured blade.
He spun around to face his enemy and his eyes widened. He and the rest of the soldiers began backing away for the nearest direction to escape.


“Here you are,” Isabel frowned at her sister as she walked into the hospital.
Alice sat alongside Oliver in the bed along the far wall. The guard seemed more alert than he had been in earlier days. He had some serious scars, but with the bloody armour removed and wounds bound up, he was looking more presentable.

“It’s my hero,” he teased her.
“I’m guessing you didn’t have any luck with Terryn?” Alice asked her.
“That knight is as thick as his armour,” Isabel argued sitting down on the adjacent bed, “he thinks spiders killed Brom. He has taken the entire guard into the caves to wipe them out once and for all.”

“All, except you. That’s not why you’re really angry is it?” Oliver then noticed her scowling at him darkly and changed the subject. “That’s the way Terryn is. He knows what he’s doing. He’s gotten us through so many scraps, and we’ve often questioned his methods, but he always comes out on top. Why do you think they tell stories about him?”

“It doesn’t take a genius to see a difference between this…” she pointed to her own scars from their encounter, “…and a spider bite. You saw the thing. It wasn’t a Brownie or any spider.”

“I think you’re right,” Alice agreed to Isabel’s surprise.
She then noticed the storybook that Alice had slid out of view from her when she arrived, “Paulus again?”
Oliver noticed her scepticism. “Don’t be so quick to dismiss Paulus. You didn’t believe Aranaea was real until you arrived.”
“Is this why you came here, to brainwash some other poor individual with your stories, Alice?”
“Look familiar?” Alice showed her a page in the book.

Isabel took a brief glance and laughed. The drawing of the creature was crude and lacking detail. Though, the more she stared at the picture, the more she realised that the details weren’t that far off.

She gave in and asked, “Does he say anything useful about them?”

“He says it is an evil race of creatures and very dangerous. They’re not unrelated to Brownies, but live deep within the earth,” Alice explained, “They are a dual race, the much larger breed living even deeper down and ruling over the smaller ones. They have great intelligence, having language and the ability to build great subterranean realms from stone like bees creating a hive. He notes they are surrounded by so much magic that it becomes difficult to separate them from the physical.”

“Does he give them a name?”

“Paulus calls them Cabalus, in his own language,” she said, “Kobalds in a northern tongue, the far off continents of Perussia and Skarletta call them Nibelung. I guess the language of the old world is closest to our own and so we call them…”

Isabel’s head snapped around as the hospital door suddenly flew open. Four guards with hideous injuries poured in, one collapsing in the doorway.

“For frog’s sake, what happened?”
“We have two dead and many more wounded,” one of the guards told her, “and there’s more coming.”
“Spiders?” Alice asked him.
“You think an ordinary cavern spider could do this?” he cried. “Gosbeck and Terryn are the only ones left down there, but they’re dead men!”
Isabel snatched the Spiderirte sword from the dying guard on the hospital bed and made for the door.
“Stay here,” she told her younger sister, “treat the wounded as they come in.”


Terryn was thrown into the far wall like a rag doll. From the floor he looked at the golden stripes along the flanks of the enormous arachnid and realised this was no ordinary spider. It was easily ten times the size of a normal cave spider, with a large jaw of razor teeth and long fangs.

Gosbeck came roaring in with is stone hammer raised and struck it in the side with a loud crunch. It reared like war horse catching the barbarian with one of its legs and sending him into the wall alongside Terryn. The huge barbarian collapsed unconscious on top of Terryn. He tried desperately to free himself as the Queen of spiders came into feast on the heroes or Aranaea.


Isabel found two more guards terribly injured crawling through the tunnels towards the surface. She snatched an iron breast plate off a female guard who was on the retreat, ignoring her pleas to fall back. The armour didn’t make her feel any safer as she came across a dead soldier with his Spiderbane plate cracked open. She was terrified. She cared little for what happened to Terryn. But after all they had been through, she couldn't leave Gosbeck to this fate. She looked up ahead to see a red stoned corridor, hearing the cries of combat.


Terryn tried to hold back the fangs of the Spider Queen with his last ounces of strength. Gosbeck suddenly came to and snatched up his stone hammer. He swung the hammer into one of its legs, breaking it in the middle. The Queen turned on him rammed him into the far wall with all of its weight. His bones cracked making him cry out in agony.

The spider suddenly reared back once again. With her Spiderite sword, Isabel entered the dungeon room and tore open the bug’s thorax with a long slashing blow. It backed away in a defensive stance, baring its fangs and burning yellow eyes. Terryn climbed to his feet and the three of them circled the Spider Queen.

The three were in bad condition, but so was the Queen. It had taken so many strikes from so many of them, that it was nearing its end. The three laid into the arachnid hacking, bludgeoning and slashing. It finally collpased and they continued to attack and stab it long after its vile life had been extinguished.


It was late evening and Terryn staggered into the tavern upon crutches. He looked over the sea of silent awe stricken faces and raised one of the huge fangs of the Spider Queen. The townsfolk roared in triumph. All but a few had gathered in the great hall to honour those that had fought and fallen in the great campaign to rid them of spider-kind.

Gosbeck, still badly injured from their fight, lay upon the table at the far end like a bed. He was bandaged up and had a mug in hand the size of barrel. Isabel and Alice were with him there, feeling a little out of place. Terryn was helped up on to the table and stood over the crowd.

“Friends. Guards. Heroes all!” Terryn announced causing them all to cheer and hush straight after. “For years we have scoured the depths of the caverns beneath Aranaea. We have driven back spider-kind on numerous occasions, but always their numbers had seemed endless. We knew there had to be some leader, some Queen. And as of this day, Aranaea destroyed it!”

Thunderous applause shook the great hall. Gosbeck thumped his mug on the table where he lay.

“We’ve lost friends this day, but also gained new ones. One hero stood out, risking her own life and saving both Gosbeck and myself from certain death,” Terryn raised a hand towards the end of the table. “Isabel Demour.”

They all cheered for her. Even Isabel found her sceptical self caught up in the moment of celebrations and a small smile appeared on her face.

“Because of her unquestionable loyalty and bravery that has led to securing the future of Aranaea, I have decided to make her a permanent member of the guard,” there were more applause before he continued, “what’s more. For the first time we have decided to send out an expedition to establish a new town. We have decided to rebuild the old site of Hurroden, keeping the name in honour of Isabel Demour.”

Isabel looked shocked and thanked him from the bottom of her heart. The townfolk all congratulated her and made a toast to the new expedition and celebrations lasted long into the night.


“This is it,” Peter said looking down the ladder into the dark dungeon, “This was where Brom came out from.”
The other guard Hadrian peered down and spat into the next level, “let’s hurry this up, I want to get back to the party. I want to have a drink with Alice Demour.”

Hadrian climbed all the way down the ladder and looked around. He was immediately shocked by what he saw. Despite the darkness, he could tell this was no cave, it was a catacomb. The walls were made of brick and the tunnels ran straight along. He turned back and saw Peters figure by the ladder staring at him. Hadrian walked several metres and found the tunnels ran straight and on forever.

“Why does Terryn want this reburied? Someone or something has built this place…” he uttered and looked back to see Peter was gone. “Peter?”
He walked back toward the ladder wondering if his comrade had walked down the tunnel. That was until he heard a voice from the level above.
“Did you call me?”

Hadrian suddenly drew his sword and took on a defensive stance looking down the tunnel where the mistaken figure had been. From the blackness ahead, a dark raspy laughter echoed back at him.


Once the celebration had died down, Alice removed her storybook from under the table. She turned to the page she had left off on when all the commotion had begun in the hospital. Gosbeck watched as she read down to the end of the page. Amar Paulus had named the creature in the language of the old world, and a variant which she recognized as close to her own. She read the name out quietly so only the two of them would hear.

“Goblin-kind…”
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Re: Short Story: Towns - the Goblin War

Postby evaldazz » Fri Jul 13, 2012 5:36 am

Hey guys party four is finished and up. I'm going be out of town for a week and a bit, so you may not see part five fo a couple of weeks.
Still,leave any comments you like and I'll check them if I can get by an internet cafe. Hope you enjoy it... ;)

Towns – The Goblin War
Guy Severn

Part four – Scapegoat


In the long darkness of the corridor, a small gangly figure crept along, formed out of the shadows more than the dim candle light. The large room ahead was lit by the fires of metal forges and molten metal pits. Steam rushed by the tunnel entrance and the clash of metal work sounded off like door bells, greeting the creature as it stepped inside the great subterranean hall. It found itself flanked by two large monstrous things in black armour guarding the entrance. Fright paralysed it, as a mangy Direwolf crashed against its razor wire cage nearby trying to snap up an early meal.

“What do you want?” a huge booming voice echoed through the chamber. “Goblin…”

The small creature eyed the huge metal throne silhouetted against the forge fires in the centre of the great hall. It was crudely crafted from iron spikes and the skulls of man, beast and dungeon kind. In its centre two burning yellow eyes stared back at him from a dark figure seated within the throne.

“Great liege of the dark realm,” the goblin announced in his raspy tongue, bowing before the throne and fluttering his fingers outward in panoply of etiquette. “Most magnificent master of the subterranean forges, great king of the hammer, Lord Kaiser of the minions of…”

“Get on with it…” the voice returned impatiently.
“I Zegar, your most humbly and trustworthy servant, most loyal and diligent of goblin kind, bring news most important to your magnificence…”
“What news?”
“I bring great tidings of Townlings, your eminence.”
“Townlings are of no importance to me,” the voice snarled at him.
“They have entered our realm your eminence, invaded our soil, broken the treaty.”
“Take it to Nusep,” the eyes narrowed into a scowl. “This is beneath my attentions. Let him deal with it. Why do you waste my time with such?”

“My lord Drauk… forgive one so unworthy as I,” Zegar pleaded fluttering his fingertips again, “I most humbly believed such a gracious and commanding lord such as yourself might reward so low a goblin as I for bringing this matter to your esteemed attention…”

The eyes disappeared and the small Goblin dove out of the way as a great iron hammer came down shattering the red cobblestones where he had once stood. Zegar ran for the exit, the tall guards on either side roaring with laughter. The Hobgoblin king walked to the entrance of the throne room and called after him down the corridor.

“Tell that dog, Nusep, destroy them all!”


“I’m not exactly sure why I’m here,” Isabel told Terryn as he led her into the great forge of Aranaea.
“A guard of Aranaea must not be without her armour,” he smiled handing her a newly crafted helmet.

It was beautifully made, with the mark of the spider engraved to look like its legs wrapped around the head of the wearer. It was dark red like blood with a strange ridging over the seams. Oliver was right; she noted the strength of Spiderbane armour right away, but more importantly the lack of weight. She looked back up at Terryn.

“What exactly is Spiderite?”
“Ever see that strange glowing dust coming out of a spider’s corpse?” the smith nearby butted in.
“I know where it came from,” Isabel told them, raising the helmet. “I mean is it bone, metal? How does it go from a spider’s guts to this?”

“It is basically the essence of the creature it is extracted from. We have found other items in the dungeons made from the essences of other things,” he tapped indicating his Khopesh blade. “Essentially it isn’t anything useful until it’s placed with a metal into a special smithy. Come and see for yourself, we’re just finishing your breast plate.”

The two of them walked over to a small hexagonal vat of red liquid. It had dark stone steps leading up to it and strange raised columns in each corner. It didn’t look like any forge oven she’d ever seen and there was something not quite natural about the way the red water moved about. The breast plate was glowing bright orange from where it lay in the adjacent forge fires. Isabel saw the two Spider Queen’s fangs had been forged into the collar pointing together down the centre. The smithy removed the iron breast plate with some tongs and lowered it into the red liquid.

The lighting of the forge went from bright orange to blood red immediately as the metal contacted the pool. Almost immediately the metal began to hiss, pop and deform, like invisible forces were beating upon it. Sparks and flashes burst forth from the vat. Strange ridges appeared along the seems in the metal, and red veins crawled out across the surface until it was entirely red. By the time the smithy removed it from the pool, the armour was covered in ice shards and cool mist poured off it. Isabel knew immediately that something like this could only be achieved one way.

“This is witchcraft…”
“Yes,” Terryn remarked taking the armour plate, “In Aranaea we honour the spiders as valiant adversaries. Early on we found splicing metal with Spiderite gives some of the giant spider’s essence to the metal. That’s why these ridges appear like their carapace and this strange line of thick black fur appears along the shoulders.”

Unsurely, Isabel tired on the breast plate and looked at herself in the mirror nearby. She was quietly overwhelmed by how good it looked on her. She tried not to show it keeping her reserve, but Terryn knew. She tried changing the subject.

“Can this process be used from any creature?”
“No,” Terryn answered helping her with her greaves, “We’ve tried it on brownies and Toads, doesn’t work. But then again, Spiders have always had a connection to magic. We believe the process can only be carried out on creatures that also have certain magical influences.”

Isabel, now in full Spiderbane armour, drew her sword and looked in the mirror once more. She was a potent lust of sight. She wore opulent shining red armour from a mythical town, a customized constructed breastplate forged with the fangs of a defeated Spider Queen. The finery of her attire impressed her more than she thought possible. She looked utterly fierce and opulently beautiful at the same time. Terryn walked up alongside her, and placed a hand on her shoulder. He spoke into her ear.

“I do believe the spider suits you Miss Demour…”

There was sudden commotion outside as towns folk were running towards the gate. Isabel and Terryn grabbed their weapons and ran outside towards the main gate. They found a large number of Townies all staring horrified towards the row of traps in the main gate. Not fifty feet from them was a small deformed figure, a creature with dark green skin and a tuft of black hair. It was screaming horrifically towards the sky, as an iron trap and snapped around both of its legs leaving it standing there in agony. Most of the guards were too shocked by the sight of the strange creature to now what to do.

“That’s one of them,” Isabel told Terryn, “One of those things that attacked Oliver and I.”

Terryn made a glance back at her and the others, then strolled out to meet the creature. Isabel found it strange that there was no surprise in his eyes, had he seen these things before? Terryn walked up to the beast as it howled in pain. It suddenly turned and took a swipe at him barely missing his greaves. It then broke into hysterical laughter at him. It looked like it was then about to speak.

“Terr…”
It never got the chance. Terryn drew out his Khopesh and removed its head from its body in one fowl swing. He picked up the head and drove it on a stone spear that was standing by the gate. Terryn walked back towards the townsfolk and nodded towards the guards.

“Remove the rest of that filth from my gate.”
“No,” Isabel told them, “Take the remains to the armoury.”
The guards looked at her strangely then to Terryn for comment.
“What for?” Terryn asked her.
“I have an idea…” she stated and headed for the gate, “tell my sister, I’ll return by the evening.”


The sun fell and the night came over Aranea. Terryn walked the lonely streets as most of the townspeople had gone inside to eat, drink or sleep. He nodded to a few guards and heroes along the way and saw everything was under control. Isabel hadn’t returned yet, but that didn’t worry him. She could handle herself with only a stone spear, now she had full Spiderbane set of armour and sword.

He passed by the great temple at the end of the plaza and headed up to the villa. He walked inside closing the door and kicked off his greaves. He lay down upon the bed and was about to close his eyes when a raspy voice entered his thoughts.

“Great hero of Aranaea….Terryn, Lord of Aranaea.”
“You have a lot of guts showing up here Zegar,” Terryn remarked without moving from his bed.
Out of the corner of his eyes the shadows in the corner took the form of the small goblin.
“You broke our most generous offer Terryn, tisk tisk…”
“So did you.”
“We did nothing of the sort!” the goblin spat in anger, “you invaded our realm! It was forbidden! Trickster! Liar! Fraud!”
“You killed Brom.”
“We did,” the goblin agreed. “He was not of Aranaea, he was a barbarian. The deal was we do not harm any townlings.”
“He was one of mine,” Terryn yelled sitting up.

“Perhaps our deal wasn’t good enough for your ego, Terryn. We gave you a great khopesh of power. We stayed out of your way and let you defeat the Spider Queen and her minions. They sing songs in your name and write stories of your deeds. All we asked was we were left to rule the subterranean realm unchallenged. Perhaps we should retract our generosity and start by tearing down Aranaea’s walls!”

“Go ahead and try it. See what happens.”
“So proud and honourable, a typical knight you are, Terryn. It is easy to brave things you know. You don’t believe we are all that dwells beneath, do you? There are horrors below our realm that you cannot imagine.”

“Tell Drauk to shove it, no more Aranaeans die to hide your pathetic existence anymore. Your words do not scare me.”
“As you wish great hero of Aranaea,” the Goblin’s voice began to trail off as his figure melted into the shadows, “I believe a great war comes marching your way…”
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Re: Short Story: Towns - the Goblin War

Postby evaldazz » Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:31 am

You're very welcome, thanks for reading ;)
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Re: Short Story: Towns - the Goblin War

Postby Jontis_00 » Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:46 am

evaldazz wrote:You're very welcome, thanks for reading ;)


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Re: Short Story: Towns - the Goblin War

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I hate spam bots. I only noticed as I was just clicking. Oh well...
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Re: Short Story: Towns - the Goblin War

Postby YetiChow » Fri Jul 20, 2012 4:19 am

evaldazz wrote:I hate spam bots. I only noticed as I was just clicking. Oh well...


I had the same spam bot post on one of my suggestions. At first I thought it just really like my idea, but when I realised it was a bot...

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Oh well, at least it's polite (or at least as polite as a mindless bot sent for possibly the rudest purpose ever can be) :lol:
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yeah this is true. Well mannered mindless machines conquering the internet.
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Re: Short Story: Towns - the Goblin War

Postby Aduvash » Fri Jul 20, 2012 11:38 pm

I finally sat down to read this, the story is looking good so far. :)
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